I liked tbe history of your game, but you can make it better.
Also with the Resair's Fayl and Giane Regions (First Areas of the Game.)
Want to make it better
than it looks?
Try mixing the grass tiles with the trees tiles.
Don't put them togetter.
For example look this ones taken from Mistridk:
You can see that the tress and grass are mixed right? try to do that.
I mean, try to not put the trees togeter and the grass togeter into one group separated from each others.
That's not right.
(Sorry if i were offensive)Second
Your mappling skills look decent and acceptable
But that blue text box that you are using is very common.
Whant to change it? It will make you game more proffesional.
Here is a link on a program were you can create your own text box!!! http://www.rpgmakervx.net/index.php?showtopic=6525
Well, that's all for now.
I have to go to school and i don't have much time
Anyways! keep it up!!
Have a nice day