I loved this game a lot. The atmosphere, the dialogue, the visual elements, it was all brilliant. The story kind of didn't make sense near the ending, but of course, it's because you were rushing, and I understand that.
When I first got to the café, I was kinda thinking, "What? Where am I? What am I doing? Why didn't I save?!". xD And for some reason, the first time I was in there, I was running around as BigEd. I have no idea how that could have happened. I went back a second time, though, and everything was as it should be.
I think you did an excellent job with this, especially with the limited amount of time you had to make it. (:
( Ahh. Now I want a bag of Gummy Worms. :3 )