Gomenasai..!! huhu sry2 chill out
Why do you change Kayo's name into James?? no good...huhu i like it better Kayo
I know what your saying about their name and of course a shinobi fit for asian name anyway
Anyway i'm just tryin to help you out give out some idea
Epiloq- Ichi and kayo were on the way to the Arena-> on their way they saved Sarisa which is badly injured fought with Mataski rogue (later on i'll post out bout Sarisa- one of the Resistance leader againts Mataski) Anyway she'd been saved and currntly hide in Ichi place.There's where Ichi got caught up with the problem..
He wasn't sure to help out Sarisa or gave her up to the Legion army bacause the resistance troops were declare as rebels or something like that..
probably the legion also under Mataski influence no one know huhu
i gotta an idea of changing the name a bit =The 8 Sealed Army of Mataski
**pls don't use any earth nation or whatever common elemental named Sry but it sounded kindda avatar Its ok to use it's that i got bored already reading the same thing from manga to anime.**
*series of names
The main char probably no need to be the same as the title.
Chikara=(its kindda girlish name, Sry) why don't make it a female char? It'll be a female guard with the same background about herself
I'm just kindda lost why off the sudden Chikara would like to join up with Ichi. You probably can make umm somthing that related to Chikara like.. he join up bacause want to find up what's really happen to his family. Well like in your default storyline Ichi run a small errand for his sensai to pick up some tea leaves in town. As he begins to leave, a mysterious man bumps into him.
Man: "Hey, kid, watch where you're going!";
Ichi: "Excuse me?!"--the man slips (something into Ichi's pocket and takes off)
Probably can make the mysterious man is accually a clan member of the Mataski whom were order to set a trap to Ichi off by 'accidentlly' gave Ichi a letter -the letter tell the Mamber of Mataski the meeting set up place- put a plot here what's related to Ichi that led to his bounty
Chikara on that moment saw the event as he already were already followed the mysterious man Because he reconize the face,the feature it reminded him of the last person stand own of his burning house with a flaming sword . He doesn't know him and wants to know if what he think is true. The mysterious person are already knew that Chikara were watch him all the time so he had to flee quickly juz before Chikara approch him He quickly ran off Ichi and gave out the letter . The Mataski seal on the letter caught Chikara attention(on the day his house were burn a rogue body A Mataski emblem tatoo in his face) , instead of going after the mysteriuos man he swing his sword to Ichi hoping for an answer.(he fought with fist accually sry mistaken)
So after the fight->Ichi tell the truth->he join up party with Ichi to find out the secret hidout probably can get the answr.
*I also have an idea that the mysterious guy is accually a friend to Chikara's father whom were fighting rogue of Mataski the day that the house got burned down (who is accually Chikara's father? why the mataski tried to kill him anyway??)But Chikara's father didnt survive the attack accept for his friend.
Nevertheless the mysterious man swone oath to revenge and work as a spy in the Mataski (which is getting weirder and weirder and crappy LoL sry juz another idea)
btw!! a female guard is still a good idea Its reminded me of Tifa ff7 (fr some wat reason)huhu
can you change the Mr E to another name?
p/s this is just an ideas I gave out since i got bored nothing to do n sry for my bad ENG n this crappy long reply huhu