QUOTE (joerao1 @ Mar 2 2010, 03:07 AM)
Here is a very rough version of your piece. I know it needs a lot of work, but please tell me what you want changed. It loops, as well.
If you absolutely hate it, tell me and I'll do something completely different.
Everyone else: Please do not request just yet until I hear back from Pseudo Sam.
I like it. As you said, it's a little rough (it seems like the percussion is off, especially in the middle part), but I like the sound you've got going.
I would maybe suggest adding some light background percussion to the whole thing - a light cymbal beat or something. I guess the relative emptyness (between the notes) is throwing me off. I dunno. What you have there is coming along great. I love the "polka" feel of the low brass line, it's awesome, but I think a more solid percussion presence would fit the feel of my game more.
Seriously, it sounds great and I'm thrilled at what you have so far. Thanks!