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[Ookie Panda]

[Identity_Crisis]

I like it, and I like her without the hat because I get a 'different vibe' from it.

And I personally think she looks really cute without the hat on and even cuter without the glasses.
So I'm glad that you've done her with a hat and without the glasses and her with a hat with the glasses, etc.

Can't wait for more! <3

[DeathKnight560]

me love ur works!!!!
I think this deserves a cookie

/me give cookie to Ookie Panda

baked it myself

[Hyuga Tylor]

This is pretty solid work Ookie, I might end up using it. Well done.

[Ookie Panda]

Updated the thread with Krystel :3

I tried making a boy earlier and it didn't work out so well.
But I think Krystel is pretty. ^.^

[DeathKnight560]

@Ookie

even better o.o
she is pretty ^^

[Celianna]

Maybe we should all band together and make one epic topic compiling all of our original RTP characters

I really like the girl without the hat, because I personally dislike that hat haha. The one thing that's off with the faceset is that you didn't give it a fat outline around her hair (her hair thingy on the right side of her face is missing it).

Krystel's eyes are off. You see the nose and mouth are straightly aligned with the chin, but the eyes are lopsided. So you should make them straight like this:
(I apologize for the black background, I got lazy and merely copied yours instead of saving it to my computer XD)

[Ookie Panda]

@Celianna:
lol Yeah, I used the white-haired girl with the pigtail's head as a base, so I just aligned the new eyes with the original position, but straightening it out does look better @w@

Another thing I need to get around to fixing I guess xP Though, her head isn't exactly facing forward like that.. she is looking up a bit.. <w<

[Kumi]

Ooooh I like these! I think they're really good! ^_^ The only thing that looks off to me (other than what Celianna pointed out) is that Maia's cheek looks a bit weird:



It might just look that way because there isn't an outline, though. Other than that, these Faces are GREAT!

[gamefreak11221]

Haha , nice one Ookie!

I wish you have a sprite of Huke from Black Rock Shooter!

[NZ Nathan]

These are nice. I like original RTP characters, thx. Can't wait for more

[scherzo]

Sorry, but just because everyone else is doing it, does not make it right, young man.

[mitchi.exe]

Oh Kumi~
I think I saw those exact avatar and sig somewhere in a pokemon community.


The hair at the back and the clothes are bothering me... T_T


This face looks a bit weird...
IMO, remove the ears.
Sharpen her eyes a bit, move the mouth partially to the left, add a blush in her left cheek, and
move the right eye a bit to the left and down.

[Ookie Panda]

I fixed Maia and Krystel, and am now introducing Aura :3

Wee<3

EDIT:
I didn't see your comment, mitchi.. xD dammit

[Shadonn]

What I like about them is that their face matches their sprite. I've seen alot of custom sprites with faces that didn't quite match. These are very nice. I like em.

[Ookie Panda]

What I like about them is that their face matches their sprite. I've seen alot of custom sprites with faces that didn't quite match. These are very nice. I like em.

Aww, thank you
I try really hard.. xD
Sometimes I can't quite get it right..
Like to me, Krystel's red hair doesn't really match the sprite..
But I do try!


Also, in my other post, I forgot to say THANK YOU!!! to Celianna and Kumi for your critisism. And nao add mitchi to that list. I love to improve, so people, don't ever be afraid to tell me what I can do to make it better~<3

(except Shanghai... I am scared of her ;_; )

[Shadonn]

Well I'm sure there is always room for improvement but from the looks of it I'd say not much is needed lol.

[jungsternator]

These are pretty nice, so good job. Aura's my favorite out of the bunch. I wish I had your hair making skills T-T

Spoiler:

I tried to do a little cleanup on Aura, since that's one I might consider using in the future still not perfect though T-Tx2

This post has been edited by jungsternator: Jun 13 2010, 07:36 AM

[Andinator]

i think for maia, you cut off part of soruve's braid...

[Ookie Panda]

These are pretty nice, so good job. Aura's my favorite out of the bunch. I wish I had your hair making skills T-T

Spoiler:

I tried to do a little cleanup on Aura, since that's one I might consider using in the future still not perfect though T-Tx2

Hey that does look cleaner ^.^
I'm not perfect either, as you can se in the comments!
I'll replace the current one with that one and tell people to credit you as well. :3