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> Valkyrie Stories - Escallion Rising, Update: Introductory Demo Released!
Hanzo Kimura
post Apr 28 2011, 08:11 PM
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Thanks I'll fix that smile.gif


My mind is really bugged which design I'll keep so I made a poll for me to see which is better smile.gif

Fantasy Blue:


Classic White:


Simple Golden:


Take your pick guys biggrin.gif


EDIT: Weird why I can't view the poll results... is it still private?, I thought the poll comes back after the Awards o.O

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Niclas
post Apr 29 2011, 11:57 AM
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The one with the white borders around the faces is best suited in my opinion.


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quigonkeichy
post Apr 29 2011, 03:59 PM
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See in all honesty actually, I don't think facesets look that good with speech bubbles as a whole, but that's just more of a personal preference really. But I'd go for the second one, the first is too clashy smile.gif


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post Apr 30 2011, 12:03 PM
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WOW!!! the best artwork + feature that i ever saw before it was like it was an E-P-I-C game!!! awesome, is this even made by the same program?!!

oh wel... not just grapic but also story, i will be a total hit if it can become an anime
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Hanzo Kimura
post Apr 30 2011, 06:39 PM
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I'll be Posting the Artworks so far here:

Imizael's Art
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Early Vance Concept -
Early Veinhart Concept -
Vance Concept -
Judia Concept -


Sessie's Art
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Veinhart Concept -
Veinhart Concept -
Vance Concept -
Elena Concept -


AM's Art
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Veinhart Concept -
Cerina Concept -
Clarisse Concept -
Cerina Digital Art -
Vance and Vein Digital Art -


Penta's Art
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Chibi Vance -
Chibi Veinhart -


Jalen's Art
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Valeria Concept -
Veinhart Concept -


Hirei's Art
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QUOTE (Niclas @ Apr 29 2011, 08:57 PM) *
The one with the white borders around the faces is best suited in my opinion.

Thanks for your Opinion smile.gif

QUOTE (quigonkeichy @ Apr 30 2011, 12:59 AM) *
See in all honesty actually, I don't think facesets look that good with speech bubbles as a whole, but that's just more of a personal preference really. But I'd go for the second one, the first is too clashy smile.gif

I respect that wink.gif


QUOTE (Spentura @ Apr 30 2011, 09:03 PM) *
WOW!!! the best artwork + feature that i ever saw before it was like it was an E-P-I-C game!!! awesome, is this even made by the same program?!!

oh wel... not just grapic but also story, i will be a total hit if it can become an anime

Thanks smile.gif



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Celianna
post Apr 30 2011, 06:55 PM
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You sure got a lot of art, didn't yah?

As for the borders, I dislike the white border because of its simplicity and it gives off this futuristic vibe. There's nothing fantasy about it, so I like your blue border a lot more.
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Hanzo Kimura
post Apr 30 2011, 07:02 PM
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Yeah I used to have a lot of Visual Artists xD Now I got no one haha But it's not really that important now, I'll be worrying that after i'm done with the stories and scenes and I'll replace the characters that is used now with the new one so everything is just a placeholder(Kaduki Characters)

for the borders I'm thinking of changing it again into a golden one and design it a bit. I guess white borders is too plain xD


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Zadorain
post Apr 30 2011, 07:04 PM
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I actually like the white borders a lot, simple and clean.


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post Apr 30 2011, 07:14 PM
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Any way two have both? Maybe two options so we can choose in game? Cause the blue border is elegant and stylish but the white borders are easily readable from the inner part near the text. Unless you can take the inner part of the white border and mix it with the blue design. I would make it more a blue fade with a small black outline much like you title logo's words. Glad to see you still have the magic touch. Looks nice.

I like Imizeal's art style.

and how many nice script systems do you have in your game now...1000? The equip system (video) is very nice and title screen, and message system..OMFG where do you get all this awesome looking stuff.
[Wads up all papers and rakes them all into trash or floor...bangs head on desk] lol They are all so good. smile.gif

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Hanzo Kimura
post Apr 30 2011, 07:35 PM
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QUOTE (Zadorain @ May 1 2011, 04:04 AM) *
I actually like the white borders a lot, simple and clean.

Well that's the point of it xD

QUOTE (ShinGamix @ May 1 2011, 04:14 AM) *
Any way two have both? Maybe two options so we can choose in game? Cause the blue border is elegant and stylish but the white borders are easily readable from the inner part near the text. Unless you can take the inner part of the white border and mix it with the blue design. I would make it more a blue fade with a small black outline much like you title logo's words. Glad to see you still have the magic touch. Looks nice.

I like Imizeal's art style.

and how many nice script systems do you have in your game now...1000? The equip system (video) is very nice and title screen, and message system..OMFG where do you get all this awesome looking stuff.
[Wads up all papers and rakes them all into trash or floor...bangs head on desk] lol They are all so good. smile.gif

Nahhh You can't have both, the borders of the faces is unchangeable so i have to stick to one design. The Inner part is actually the same, the border is the only thing changed.
The Scripts are shown in my credit list, if they're not made by me, And no I only have few scripts in the database smile.gif


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post Apr 30 2011, 07:39 PM
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Looks good so far, I suppose.

The story is kinda hard to follow. I reread the entire story synopsis a good three times,
and all I can understand is that a plant was found, it was named Escallion after Escalione, and then
during the Vanir Era, Vance and Veinhart are born. And after blah blah blah...the continent is
under tight rule during the Cronos era, and then Vance & Veinhart are imprisoned and escape.
Wow.

My point is, the story is an amazing wall of text that, to be frank, is quite boring and bland.
I feel like I've heard and played this before. Perhaps liven it up a bit? The characters seem a little bland as well.
The "I don't fear death" type. *yawn*

The battle system also doesn't woo me too much. But perhaps that's just because
I'm kinda tired of sideview. The maps above look kinda bland and boring as well, compared
to some of your earlier maps, with were bursting with detail. I do like the white border, though,
it's nice and simple. The art is amazing, as well.

Sorry if I come off as rude or antagonizing. You're a nice guy. wink.gif


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Hanzo Kimura
post Apr 30 2011, 07:49 PM
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I really don't mind, I'll take that as your "Constructive" Criticism but you give way too negative comments (all i red was bland and boring) and haven't come up with any positive or fix to that.

But I thank you for reading the whole thing smile.gif

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post Apr 30 2011, 07:58 PM
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I like that better than the white, if anything.


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post Apr 30 2011, 08:00 PM
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Crap, sorry about that, my head is KILLING me right now...

For the story, like I said, try to liven it up a bit. Maybe the Vein will have some
kind of revenge towards the specific person that killed his parents/girlfriend? Something like that I suppose.
Maybe you could add a summary of the story as well. It's kinda boring and confusing reading the whole thing. smile.gif

For the interior maps above, try to add some more clutter to it. Alternatively, you could make it smaller.
Do you really think a prison would just have two wooden beds in it? tongue.gif Speaking of those, they're a bit blurred.
Might want to fix that. The battle system, I would say add some cool effects, but you already seem to have those.

And like I said, I'm LOVING the white border. Good luck with this, Hanzo! happy.gif


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Hanzo Kimura
post Apr 30 2011, 08:08 PM
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QUOTE (Avatar176 @ May 1 2011, 05:00 AM) *
Crap, sorry about that, my head is KILLING me right now...

lol just in-case... to make up from your last post laugh.gif

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For the story, like I said, try to liven it up a bit. Maybe the Vein will have some
kind of revenge towards the specific person that killed his parents/girlfriend? Something like that I suppose.
Maybe you could add a summary of the story as well. It's kinda boring and confusing reading the whole thing. smile.gif

How could he make revenge, He doesn't know who killed them xD, Summary of a story will be up soon.
Well, DC Members know the real story, I really don't like giving the spoilers to the story so I'll leave you on what you 'know'

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For the interior maps above, try to add some more clutter to it. Alternatively, you could make it smaller.
Do you really think a prison would just have two wooden beds in it? tongue.gif Speaking of those, they're a bit blurred.
Might want to fix that. The battle system, I would say add some cool effects, but you already seem to have those.

We have our own preferences on how the owner of the house keep theirs clean smile.gif, Comeback again after a demo released
maybe that'll change things up from what you think smile.gif

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Good luck with this, Hanzo! happy.gif

Likewise to your projects.

@skyelove
Thanks for the Opinion biggrin.gif

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ShinGamix
post Apr 30 2011, 08:25 PM
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I like the yellowish (newest one) best now. Especially around the name but the face set pic needs the same little corner tweaks and little lines too.
I'd like to see them a blue tone instead of the yellow also.

On adding more cluter to your inner maps. I am against it. The pics focus more on the characters and interaction rather than going to a "flea market or pawn shop full of stuff"

[scurries off to find script list...like the message display system]

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Celianna
post Apr 30 2011, 10:02 PM
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How about the golden border but with a brown background in it instead of blue?
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Hanzo Kimura
post Apr 30 2011, 10:34 PM
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here's another version of the golden border with the face border shingamix suggested and the bg color cel suggested:


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post Apr 30 2011, 10:38 PM
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Much better; good job.


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post Apr 30 2011, 11:51 PM
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NOW It looks freakin perfect!

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