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 Oct 10 2010, 01:02 AM
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Hello Everybody, I am thinking about making an oblivion like game in RMVX. I've made a couple sprites so far i was just wondering if anyone could give me some tips/criticism as these are my sprites that I have ever made. Thanks
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Oct 10 2010, 01:20 AM
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Excellent sprites, but they need more shading, particularly around the hair.
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Oct 10 2010, 09:00 AM
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Nice sprites, but some of the colours are too bright (especially the yellow, the green and the orange/reddish). And, as Senapho said, more shading. Good luck!
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Oct 10 2010, 02:46 PM
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Hmm, just a few problems that I can see! Some of those colors need to be toned down, like the orc into a darker color. Also, I would recommend that you shade in the sprites a little more! Finally, I would suggest making the linesbetween the head and the neck, and his outline a little more noticable! But besides that, it looks great!
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Oct 10 2010, 08:14 PM
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very nice!
they do need to be shaded a little more and need to be less bright but still great job 
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Oct 11 2010, 12:09 PM
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Thanks for everyones input i will sure to use this when i do more spriting, Thanks
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Oct 21 2010, 09:28 PM
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Yea, you need shading, good sprites though. And few are just a little too bright.
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Oct 22 2010, 12:42 AM
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Cool just turn the color down and I play oblivion!
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