Umm.., i don't want to sound rude or anything, but is this an serious rpg project or
just some kind of joke game O.o?
cause the story doesn't make any sense at all(you can't really call it an story),and neither does the plot:/
I recommend reading the Project recruitment rules and edit your post
before an moderator finds this.
cause they'll most likely give you the usual 24 hours to edit your post and otherwise close it
Again, just giving some advice here