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> The Cartographer II, Now with more Demo!!
Avadan
post Mar 9 2011, 01:09 PM
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---> DEMO <---






Continuing the adventures of Reuben and his friends, this time our hero
sets out on the task to clear the name of one of his old companions.



The Cartographer II keeps the light rpg setting established in the first game,
this time taking place in the conflicted southern region of the continent, our
heroes will explore the arid lands of Shams Al Din to the mistical island
of Gensyuken, fighting pirates and terrifiyn cults, worshipers of ancient
underwater creatures.

Previous to the events of the first game Arcturus Mortem convinced Jade Artrias
to steal the Draconimicon in order to locate the legendary Howling Island. After
failing to read the book, Arcturus finds Reuben, a new Dragon Slayer, and requests
his help to achivew his plans.

At the present time an inquisitor from the holy land of Hyrleghast as reached Cinnamon
town to find out the whereabouts of Jade Artrias.


Characters:


Reuben Rainard, having returned to Cinnamon he feels he can hang his Dragon Sword and
hopefully never need to use it, but the news of his friend Jade makes him gear up and prepare
for a new adventure.


Alina Flagg, with the thought of settling down in Cinnamon town for a while, she opens a school
of magic, but the presence of the Inquisitor reminds her of the fragility of her current life and
makes her think of her past, a past she isnt ready to share with Reuben.


Mary Iliaren after having struggled with the awful review made by the "Spend the night?"
magazine and managing to not close the Inn through out the months Reuben was out, hearing that
her friends will leave again, thats just to much for her.


Will Gerard constantly dreaming of epic adventures and becoming a grand warrior himself, he won't pass this
oportunity to travel along side Reuben, Althendrias Dragon Slayer. Though he will learn the hardships of
the path of a hero.

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So!!... the recruiting part, I did post this here for a reason xD
Here's the thing, my english isn't that good, I would say its cause english isnt my first language batz I write spanish just as sloppy as I write english xD.
I'm pretty sure I can convey well enough the general feeling of a scene or the main idea of the dialogue... but in a very blunt way, nothing is subtle or interesting, its more like a check list of stuff the characters should say xD
So, I'm looking for a little help, I need a team to spellcheck, grammar fix and give bit of feedback on how the game is going.
I know this is asking a lot but the work pace wont be so hard, the game is divided in chapters so it will go one at a time : )

Plus you'll be one the first people who will play the TC2... how cool is that xD

I apreciate any help but I'm looking for people who know how to write dialogues and stuff : /
So before diving in the whole game, we can test stuff out with a demo of the game : )

.... anyone interested?


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Jasonicus
post Mar 9 2011, 01:59 PM
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Old Friend
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Ahh, a sequel. Good luck. Btw, your English is pretty damn good for the most part.


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new
post Mar 9 2011, 02:12 PM
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im interested biggrin.gif more playtesting though

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FreakshowGamer
post Mar 9 2011, 02:26 PM
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I'll definitely help out with that if you'd like. I'm very picky when it comes to character dialogue and spelling.
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Roane
post Mar 9 2011, 06:57 PM
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4TehLulz
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I'd love to help out. Just downloaded the first one(but won't have time to play it till later this evening) after stumbling over your game trailer while looking up stuff on Youtube. The first game looks amazing and I'd love to help out with your sequel.


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Paschendaele
post Mar 9 2011, 07:03 PM
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Che
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Interested kawai

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Celianna
post Mar 9 2011, 07:16 PM
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Your English seems fine to me! Though of course, beta readers are always a good thing, whether your first language is English or not.

Nice art btw, cute :3
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dvorski12
post Mar 9 2011, 10:26 PM
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Naruto fan!!!
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Can i be beta tester!? Please??!! *puppy eyes*


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Avadan
post Mar 9 2011, 11:34 PM
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Thx guys : D
I guess I have no problem in threads or posts, but when writting dialogues for a whole game, not so much xD

At least most reviewers agreed on that so thats what I focusing this time >:3


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Emmych
post Mar 10 2011, 12:55 AM
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Woo, Cartographer II! biggrin.gif
Hey, man - I'd totally be up for some proofreading. I'm pretty good at it. c: Lemme know!
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Retired-Pine
post Mar 10 2011, 02:08 AM
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Not a democracy
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You know where to find me when there's something needed, specially if it's in our own language : P


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Kaptain J
post Mar 10 2011, 07:50 AM
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Death says "Hi"
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I'll help.


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Zadorain
post Mar 10 2011, 08:10 AM
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We do what we must because we can.
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It's too bad I've been so busy lately. I'd love to help. Everything here looks great, I wish you the best of luck with your project- I will definitely be playing.


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He was talking about his sprite. Get your mind out of the gutter.
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Lostkid
post Mar 10 2011, 11:16 PM
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I'd definetely would like to help with the spell checking. Got alot of time on my hands too so I could get it back to ya quickly.
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pauluz
post Mar 13 2011, 02:25 PM
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Weem, YOUR MOM IS AWESOME<3
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if you still need a beta tester, i will make some time. i loved the first episode tongue.gif


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Peva
post Mar 21 2011, 02:17 AM
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Also racism
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Hey I'd love to join in! This would be fun, and I think I could really help ^^


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Steysel
post Mar 21 2011, 02:31 AM
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A sequel, yay! >=D


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aaronfeld
post Mar 23 2011, 03:32 PM
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I can help with beta testing. Are all those tile sets custom cuz they are amazing. Totally liking the squid thing! Ships are nice too.


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Lord_Kries
post Mar 25 2011, 10:16 PM
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It looks like you've got enough beta testers, but I'll throw my hat in the ring anyway.
Really loved the first one, and I'm very much looking forward to the sequel.
EDIT: And if you're looking for someone to actually write dialouge, I'm interested in that as well. I can provide you with examples if you like.

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Retired-Pine
post Mar 25 2011, 10:23 PM
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Not a democracy
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I don't think dialog is much of an issue for Avadan. Not that I beta tested anything....


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