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> OBubblesO Battleback's, Ever First Attemp >.<
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OBubblesO
post Aug 24 2011, 07:38 AM
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OBubblesO Battleback's


Hellow there guys, is the first post i make wanting to show the community my project job.

Okee, this time i want show you the first Battleback i've ever made, seeing Hanzo job, gave me inspiration and also an idea of how make it out.

OBubblesO Note:The battleback's i will show in this post are actually for my project, i mean, they aren't for public use. Maybe when i get skilled at this i open a shop or whatever. Also i will keep original and updated version of my work in this post so ppl can see how the Battleback evolve.

Basic FAQ:
Q: OBubblesO would take a request from me? O:
A: Negative, for the moments is just a post to show my work ^^.

Q: Can i take some of the Battleback's in this post?
A: Negative, since are the first ones im making on my own, they will be directly for my project.

Q: How OBubblesO make them?
A: Artist secret ^^!... Looking for the forum u may find the answer to that question.

Q: Then if OBubblesO dont take requests, what he's doing with this post?
A: Just want community rating ^^. (1/10)

Q: OBubblesO hate newbies that just come around asking for Battlebacks?
A: Yes he do ^^.

Okee guys no one word more here is my Battleback:

Bosquesito mean Little Forest:

Bosquesito V1.1 --> First attempt (Original)
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Bosquesito V1.2 --> Fixed trees, object places and some shadows.
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Bosquesito V1.3 --> New Background.
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Bosquesito V1.4 --> Fixed new background tone / tree tone.
V1.4
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<< Darker Background to fit trees. >>

(Update)V1.4B (Final)
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<< New tree tone to fit background. >>


Credits?:
Of course there must be credited people, if not i couldn't make this. (If i get wrong about second user please correct me).
Hanzo >> Inspiration lol (;
Celianna >> For ur awesome trees lol (:

Thx for take ur time taking a look to my post happy.gif.

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post Aug 24 2011, 07:47 AM
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Looks really good.


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OBubblesO
post Aug 24 2011, 07:56 AM
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QUOTE (Rapu @ Aug 24 2011, 03:47 AM) *
Looks really good.


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post Aug 24 2011, 08:44 AM
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Looks pretty good. I do have a couple of comments, though:
1) Most of the canopies from trees in the back of the respective top and bottom appear in front of canopies of trees at the front.
2) Second tree left of the rock in at the top center seems to have trunk issues. There's a trunk of one tree cut off by the trunk of another place directly over it.


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post Aug 24 2011, 09:38 AM
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It's pretty nice, Bubbles. There's an error as well on the bottom. The rock seems to have grasses around its bottom yet it's placed on the dirt autotile.


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post Aug 24 2011, 10:03 AM
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It looks pretty decent but you have too many trees and some are overlapping each other, Also I would add more flowers.


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post Aug 24 2011, 05:42 PM
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Thanks every one for they comments ^-^.

QUOTE (Anaxim @ Aug 24 2011, 04:44 AM) *
Looks pretty good. I do have a couple of comments, though:
1) Most of the canopies from trees in the back of the respective top and bottom appear in front of canopies of trees at the front.
2) Second tree left of the rock in at the top center seems to have trunk issues. There's a trunk of one tree cut off by the trunk of another place directly over it.


Thanks ^-^.
blink.gif Wow thanks for let me know it, i was working on that really late, so that kind of erros dont surprise me tongue.gif .
2º Omg lol D: ><.

QUOTE (Reisen @ Aug 24 2011, 05:38 AM) *
It's pretty nice, Bubbles. There's an error as well on the bottom. The rock seems to have grasses around its bottom yet it's placed on the dirt autotile.


Thanks ^-^.
Yea, you are right, bad place to put that rock.

QUOTE (The JJ @ Aug 24 2011, 06:03 AM) *
It looks pretty decent but you have too many trees and some are overlapping each other, Also I would add more flowers.


Thanks ^-^.
More Flowers: Got it, since my maps got a lot of decoration it will look weird if battleback dont. So u re right imma add some more.
Overlapping trees: Mmmm yea hehe >< i must fix it (:
Many trees: U re trying to say i should reduce the amount? Or that many trees look bad with that overlapping (Wich i will fix)? would be good if gimme an answer back to keep it in mind ^-^.

OBubblesO Note:Thanks everyone for they comments. I will fix this as fast as possible and edit the first post with the updated BG ^^.

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post Aug 24 2011, 05:54 PM
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Well remove some trees so that we can see more of the background which you put into the battle background (behind the trees).


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post Aug 24 2011, 06:16 PM
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QUOTE (The JJ @ Aug 24 2011, 01:54 PM) *
Well remove some trees so that we can see more of the background which you put into the battle background (behind the trees).


Got it. Will start the update nao (now) happy.gif.

OBubblesO Note:First post updated. ^^

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post Aug 24 2011, 10:28 PM
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It look good now, Bubbles. The background seems to be very pixelated though .. or maybe that's just me @_@


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post Aug 24 2011, 11:23 PM
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QUOTE (Reisen @ Aug 24 2011, 06:28 PM) *
It look good now, Bubbles. The background seems to be very pixelated though .. or maybe that's just me @_@


Thankiee Reisen ^-^

Pixelated: blink.gif Where where >< i cant allow that.


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post Aug 25 2011, 01:29 AM
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in the flat tree background that you put behund Cel's at the top!


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post Aug 25 2011, 01:33 AM
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QUOTE (JonathanMK @ Aug 24 2011, 09:29 PM) *
in the flat tree background that you put behund Cel's at the top!


Ohh ic ic... Thanks for taking an eye of that for me (; .

Will update my Battleback soon with a new background. ^-^


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post Aug 25 2011, 01:35 AM
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Looks really good I like it, I hope you do more smile.gif
I see something weird at the background maybe is just me tongue.gif


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post Aug 25 2011, 01:46 AM
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QUOTE (Zuxeria @ Aug 24 2011, 09:35 PM) *
Looks really good I like it, I hope you do more smile.gif
I see something weird at the background maybe is just me tongue.gif


Thankiee! ^-^ and yea i will make more in a future meanwhile i advance with my project.

Weird Background: Yea u re right, it deformed for some reason... (it is formed with brush tool in photoshop) I dont know really why it lossed many quality...

OBubblesO Note: Post 1 Updated! ^-^ hope like it biggrin.gif.

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post Aug 25 2011, 02:16 AM
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WOW! Now It looks GREAT!!
I really like it...
Are you using KGS or YEM?


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post Aug 25 2011, 02:26 AM
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QUOTE (Zuxeria @ Aug 24 2011, 10:16 PM) *
WOW! Now It looks GREAT!!
I really like it...
Are you using KGS or YEM?


Hehe Yey! ^^
Thanks Zuxeria happy.gif.
KGS or YEM: I rather dont reveal those information yet, sorry about that unsure.gif


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post Aug 25 2011, 09:42 AM
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Ah, it looks very great now Bubbles! smile.gif You just need to give it more contrast so it can blend in with the background. (The one behind the actual battle background) But that's optional. Looking forward for more wink.gif


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post Aug 25 2011, 04:29 PM
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QUOTE (Reisen @ Aug 25 2011, 05:42 AM) *
Ah, it looks very great now Bubbles! smile.gif You just need to give it more contrast so it can blend in with the background. (The one behind the actual battle background) But that's optional. Looking forward for more wink.gif


Tehee Thankiee Reisen happy.gif.

More Contrast: Mmmm about that, i dont get totally the idea, u mean giving Background some shadows too to fit my trees? Or give the tree some more bright to match the background?.

Waiting for an answer to update happy.gif.


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post Aug 25 2011, 04:33 PM
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Yeah, something pretty much like that. But not too bright though, it'll probably hurt people's eyes.


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