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Aug 24 2011, 07:38 AM
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OBubblesO Battleback's Hellow there guys, is the first post i make wanting to show the community my project job. Okee, this time i want show you the first Battleback i've ever made, seeing Hanzo job, gave me inspiration and also an idea of how make it out. OBubblesO Note:The battleback's i will show in this post are actually for my project, i mean, they aren't for public use. Maybe when i get skilled at this i open a shop or whatever. Also i will keep original and updated version of my work in this post so ppl can see how the Battleback evolve. Basic FAQ: Q: OBubblesO would take a request from me? O: A: Negative, for the moments is just a post to show my work ^^. Q: Can i take some of the Battleback's in this post? A: Negative, since are the first ones im making on my own, they will be directly for my project. Q: How OBubblesO make them? A: Artist secret ^^!... Looking for the forum u may find the answer to that question. Q: Then if OBubblesO dont take requests, what he's doing with this post? A: Just want community rating ^^. (1/10) Q: OBubblesO hate newbies that just come around asking for Battlebacks? A: Yes he do ^^. Okee guys no one word more here is my Battleback: Bosquesito mean Little Forest: Bosquesito V1.1 --> First attempt (Original) Spoiler: Bosquesito V1.2 --> Fixed trees, object places and some shadows. Spoiler: Bosquesito V1.3 --> New Background. Spoiler: Bosquesito V1.4 --> Fixed new background tone / tree tone. V1.4 Spoiler: (Update)V1.4B (Final) Spoiler: Credits?: Of course there must be credited people, if not i couldn't make this. (If i get wrong about second user please correct me). Hanzo >> Inspiration lol (; Celianna >> For ur awesome trees lol (: Thx for take ur time taking a look to my post This post has been edited by OBubblesO: Aug 28 2011, 06:52 AM -------------------- "I'm a Lover. I'm a Dreamer. I'm a Designer. I'm a Maker." ![]() |
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Aug 24 2011, 07:47 AM
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Looks really good.
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Aug 24 2011, 07:56 AM
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-------------------- "I'm a Lover. I'm a Dreamer. I'm a Designer. I'm a Maker." ![]() |
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Aug 24 2011, 08:44 AM
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![]() Captain Paradox Extreme ![]() Type: Undisclosed Alignment: Chaotic Neutral |
Looks pretty good. I do have a couple of comments, though:
1) Most of the canopies from trees in the back of the respective top and bottom appear in front of canopies of trees at the front. 2) Second tree left of the rock in at the top center seems to have trunk issues. There's a trunk of one tree cut off by the trunk of another place directly over it. -------------------- "Lightning is like a troll; You don't know what hit you till you smell it."
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Aug 24 2011, 09:38 AM
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It's pretty nice, Bubbles. There's an error as well on the bottom. The rock seems to have grasses around its bottom yet it's placed on the dirt autotile.
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Aug 24 2011, 10:03 AM
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![]() TGOD ![]() Type: Designer Alignment: Chaotic Neutral |
It looks pretty decent but you have too many trees and some are overlapping each other, Also I would add more flowers.
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Aug 24 2011, 05:42 PM
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Thanks every one for they comments ^-^.
Looks pretty good. I do have a couple of comments, though: 1) Most of the canopies from trees in the back of the respective top and bottom appear in front of canopies of trees at the front. 2) Second tree left of the rock in at the top center seems to have trunk issues. There's a trunk of one tree cut off by the trunk of another place directly over it. Thanks ^-^. 1º 2º Omg lol D: ><. It's pretty nice, Bubbles. There's an error as well on the bottom. The rock seems to have grasses around its bottom yet it's placed on the dirt autotile. Thanks ^-^. Yea, you are right, bad place to put that rock. It looks pretty decent but you have too many trees and some are overlapping each other, Also I would add more flowers. Thanks ^-^. More Flowers: Got it, since my maps got a lot of decoration it will look weird if battleback dont. So u re right imma add some more. Overlapping trees: Mmmm yea hehe >< i must fix it (: Many trees: U re trying to say i should reduce the amount? Or that many trees look bad with that overlapping (Wich i will fix)? would be good if gimme an answer back to keep it in mind ^-^. OBubblesO Note:Thanks everyone for they comments. I will fix this as fast as possible and edit the first post with the updated BG ^^. This post has been edited by OBubblesO: Aug 24 2011, 05:44 PM -------------------- "I'm a Lover. I'm a Dreamer. I'm a Designer. I'm a Maker." ![]() |
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Aug 24 2011, 05:54 PM
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![]() TGOD ![]() Type: Designer Alignment: Chaotic Neutral |
Well remove some trees so that we can see more of the background which you put into the battle background (behind the trees).
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Aug 24 2011, 06:16 PM
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Well remove some trees so that we can see more of the background which you put into the battle background (behind the trees). Got it. Will start the update nao (now) OBubblesO Note:First post updated. ^^ This post has been edited by OBubblesO: Aug 24 2011, 06:46 PM -------------------- "I'm a Lover. I'm a Dreamer. I'm a Designer. I'm a Maker." ![]() |
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Aug 24 2011, 10:28 PM
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It look good now, Bubbles. The background seems to be very pixelated though .. or maybe that's just me @_@
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Aug 24 2011, 11:23 PM
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It look good now, Bubbles. The background seems to be very pixelated though .. or maybe that's just me @_@ Thankiee Reisen ^-^ Pixelated: -------------------- "I'm a Lover. I'm a Dreamer. I'm a Designer. I'm a Maker." ![]() |
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Aug 25 2011, 01:29 AM
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in the flat tree background that you put behund Cel's at the top!
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Aug 25 2011, 01:33 AM
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in the flat tree background that you put behund Cel's at the top! Ohh ic ic... Thanks for taking an eye of that for me (; . Will update my Battleback soon with a new background. ^-^ -------------------- "I'm a Lover. I'm a Dreamer. I'm a Designer. I'm a Maker." ![]() |
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Aug 25 2011, 01:35 AM
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![]() My Mind my rules ![]() Type: Writer Alignment: Chaotic Good |
Looks really good I like it, I hope you do more
I see something weird at the background maybe is just me -------------------- I support:
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Aug 25 2011, 01:46 AM
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Looks really good I like it, I hope you do more I see something weird at the background maybe is just me Thankiee! ^-^ and yea i will make more in a future meanwhile i advance with my project. Weird Background: Yea u re right, it deformed for some reason... (it is formed with brush tool in photoshop) I dont know really why it lossed many quality... OBubblesO Note: Post 1 Updated! ^-^ hope like it This post has been edited by OBubblesO: Aug 25 2011, 01:48 AM -------------------- "I'm a Lover. I'm a Dreamer. I'm a Designer. I'm a Maker." ![]() |
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Aug 25 2011, 02:16 AM
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WOW! Now It looks GREAT!!
I really like it... Are you using KGS or YEM? -------------------- I support:
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Aug 25 2011, 02:26 AM
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WOW! Now It looks GREAT!! I really like it... Are you using KGS or YEM? Hehe Yey! ^^ Thanks Zuxeria KGS or YEM: I rather dont reveal those information yet, sorry about that -------------------- "I'm a Lover. I'm a Dreamer. I'm a Designer. I'm a Maker." ![]() |
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Aug 25 2011, 09:42 AM
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Ah, it looks very great now Bubbles!
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Aug 25 2011, 04:29 PM
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Ah, it looks very great now Bubbles! Tehee Thankiee Reisen More Contrast: Mmmm about that, i dont get totally the idea, u mean giving Background some shadows too to fit my trees? Or give the tree some more bright to match the background?. Waiting for an answer to update -------------------- "I'm a Lover. I'm a Dreamer. I'm a Designer. I'm a Maker." ![]() |
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Aug 25 2011, 04:33 PM
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Yeah, something pretty much like that. But not too bright though, it'll probably hurt people's eyes.
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