QUOTE (Kiba94 @ Nov 6 2011, 12:04 AM)
This is pretty excellent for your first project! I have a few qualms about spelling/capitalization errors, though. For example, "Gardnr" and "Good Night, Travis". Those are just little things though.
Also, some sprites seem to glitch if you talk to them from different directions, i.e. the Fortuneteller in the initial suspect questioning.
Overall though, it's an awesome game, and certainly interesting. A few test runs wouldn't hurt though~
It might be a good idea to say how you enter and exit rooms/doors. I was kind of confused for a bit there.
Yeah, I must admit that typing is not one of my big strengths, but I do my best not to write senseless crap ^-^
Also, my primary language is theoretically German although I am sorta bilingual - but, you see, in German, you write every f*cking noun with a capital letter, so I sometimes accidently do the same in English :3
I think I'll just have to go over it all again and try to find all the typos and errors. My friend actually playtested it and checked out every corner of the game, and we actually noticed 2 quite fatal bugs.
I've already fixed them
and will upload them as soon as I've fixed the typos and some more minor errors, but I'll list them here so you don't actually bump into them by accident, because they'll make
* SPOILERS AHEAD *
-> Do not ask the medicine man twice for medicine when buying it, he will sell it again and take your second Gold Coin, which is vital for gameplay.
-> Finish all secondary (Gold Coin) quests before finding the Book on Decoding, because you won't be able to do them then, and you actually need a min. of 1 Gold Coin left
This post has been edited by newspaper_guru: Nov 6 2011, 08:35 AM