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[RPG_Lover]

This is my little attempt of making a music lyric and I am not good at it so I would like any ideas to improve it. I will not be making song lyric much but this one I put some effort in for a project idea I plan to do. When I one day get money to pay someone to make.

(sad voice)
It was a sad and raining day;
Back when my heart was a stray.

(slow beat)
Now when I turn around.
I can't stop but hear him say
(fast beat and joy voice)

Here I am, Coming again
No time will stop me now;

Here I am, Standing again
I will be with you always.

(pause for 4 sec)

(chour)
I shall not fall, I shall not fall

When I am dreaming, I can hear your voice;
I am racing against my (Pick up voice) HEART;

Even in the Darkness of my heart;
I will stand strong...;

Here I am, Coming again
No time will stop me now;

Here I am, Standing again
I will be with you always.

(slow)
Even...Every...Passing...(Speed up)
MOMENT!

(slow)
Every...Passing...Moment...

[LongKathleen]

Not bad.
I can feel your pain. My heart was broken too. Dozens of times.
Can I write music to your lyrics? Guitar would be enough, I suppose.
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This post has been edited by LongKathleen: Apr 2 2012, 08:10 AM

[RPG_Lover]

You can. I do not care really.