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Mar 25 2012, 09:00 PM
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![]() I will put on a puppet show for you...Just need a Puppet or 2. ![]() Type: Writer Alignment: Chaotic Evil |
This is my little attempt of making a music lyric and I am not good at it so I would like any ideas to improve it. I will not be making song lyric much but this one I put some effort in for a project idea I plan to do. When I one day get money to pay someone to make.
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It was a sad and raining day; Back when my heart was a stray. (slow beat) Now when I turn around. I can't stop but hear him say (fast beat and joy voice) Here I am, Coming again No time will stop me now; Here I am, Standing again I will be with you always. (pause for 4 sec) (chour) I shall not fall, I shall not fall When I am dreaming, I can hear your voice; I am racing against my (Pick up voice) HEART; Even in the Darkness of my heart; I will stand strong...; Here I am, Coming again No time will stop me now; Here I am, Standing again I will be with you always. (slow) Even...Every...Passing...(Speed up) MOMENT! (slow) Every...Passing...Moment... -------------------- |
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Mar 26 2012, 12:03 PM
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Not bad.
I can feel your pain. My heart was broken too. Dozens of times. Can I write music to your lyrics? Guitar would be enough, I suppose. ______________ free audio editor This post has been edited by LongKathleen: Apr 2 2012, 08:10 AM |
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Mar 26 2012, 03:28 PM
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![]() I will put on a puppet show for you...Just need a Puppet or 2. ![]() Type: Writer Alignment: Chaotic Evil |
You can. I do not care really.
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